Monday, July 16, 2012

Hannah's College Paragraph Re-write=)

College is an extremely important step towards succes in our current culture because without college young adults are looked upon as uneducated and unsucessful immediatly.  I would like to attend college in order to be able to get a high paying job, like a physical therapist which is my current goal.  This is a necessity to me because I want to live the type of life my parents have supplied me with and be able to give that life to y children as well.  To be able to go on vacation, give them Ipods, and current material objects that are all the rage is important to me.  When moving out teenagers dont realize they will not automatically have the life they would want to have and may have to live in a scetch appartment and have roman noodles every night for dinner.  I do not want to be in this stage for long, so thats why college is so important to me.  It is currently very hard to find a good job in America because of the economy, college will give me a step up on competitors and hopefully also land me a job I actually love to do, whatever that may be, which I will discover when I reach college while working towards a major. 

1 comment:

  1. Brava! It's true, the economy in America is TERRIBLE! Not going to college is basically a death sentence to some people. The one's who don't go and manage to have great lives anyway should be considered lucky. College is definitely a good reassurance that one will have a happy life if they use college correctly.

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